Flash the Readies –
Susie
I’m leaving the station and cold weather kills my past
lifetime
Establishing
shot of the roof top which the actor is standing on. Close up shot of the actor
breathing out steam (implying it’s cold) direct link between the lyrics and the
visuals.
But I’m not lonely, for so many years, so many years...
Long shot
of the actor from behind as the audience sees him fall down
My new location? Case for some fucking analyst, now I am
going to leave the town.
Flash
back (in black and white) to the actor walking down the dark alley way to meet
his girlfriend which get into a fight and end up breaking up. All of this will
use a range of shots from mid shot to long shot
The one and only air that we breathe is cold as we are, cold
as we are cold as the...
Eye level
shots of the band performing, main focus on the lead singer
Fools that never shed
their tears when they lose someone they will miss
Close up
shot of the lead singer during the chorus
Flakes are falling on my outlying wills and they wake a new
lease of life
Mid shot
of the lead singer singing this time during the flash back as the camera is in
front of him as he is walking forward/towards it
My vacation will never end, will never end will never end
No
performing is involved this time, however a long shot is used on the lead
singer and his girlfriend (the flash backs will show different moments of the
actors past)
And the fools will
never shed their tears when they lose someone they will miss
Back to
the band performing, close up shots of the lead singer
I’m waking into the night, where everything seems so bright
Late
evening, it's getting dark and we see the lead singer walking towards the
building we see him jumping off at the beginning. For this there could be a
range of shots used, either an eye line match or simple a long shot from behind
of the lead singer showing the building and him walking towards it
And road is running on and soon I am going to be at home
High angle
shot of the lead singer going up the stairs
I’m staring at the scene wondering what it might mean
Back to
the flash back of the lead singer and his girlfriend laying on a roof top of
their house looking into the sky
As candles light the sea of raindrops with no gravity
Lead
singer is playing guitar under his girlfriends windows during the rain
Fools that never shed
their tears when they lose someone they will miss (x2)
Back to
the band performing, close up shots on the lead singer and other members of the
band. However seeing as the song is almost finished other ideas are to be
considered which would be more to do with the narrative.
I’m leaving the station and cold weather kills my past
lifetime
Point of
view shot in which we see eyes almost closing and his girlfriend shouting for
help
Note: The flash backs may not be
black and white. This is still to be considered and evaluated.






