Peer Assessment/Feedback on the First Draft

Group	Grade	Target
1.      Vlad & Shuvo	Level 2 (D) 18 Marks	Use a greater variety of shots Record more narrative Improve the lighting on the lead singer More close up shots of the lead singer
2.      Simona & Rai	Level 2	More close up shots of the lead singer More variety of shots during the performance and the narrative Finish the narrative
3.      Connie & Nicky	Level 3 (C) 23 Marks	More variety of shots on the lead singer during the performance especially close up shots
4.      Julius & Mummina	Level 2-3 (C) 24 Marks	Fill in the blackouts The editing needs to be faster pace More close up shots on the singer Syncing was not spot on during some moments